Worst fears realised as death knocks at the door

As I slouched in my warm seat, I started to relax.

All my fear of the bumpy, lurching take-off faded.

My racing heart slowed to a normal beat.

Yawning, I glance out the window, the bright flash of the light of the wing cutting through the darkness of morning.

A ding pierces my thoughts, the captain's voice comes through a static speaker telling us ''we are at cruising altitude'' and that ''this is a fine morning for flying''.

I let out a long heavy sigh, only one gruelling hour into the flight.

Fading back in my chair, I noticed that the distant rumbling had grown louder.

The low rumble had become a sharp crack; bright blue filled the sky.

''No no no'' I thought to myself.

But it was inevitable we were tearing into a thunderstorm.

I began to panic, feeling my grip tighten on the armrest, my knuckles turning white like winter snow.

My heart pounding as a crazed drummer, cold sweat spread along my brow.

Suddenly, the plane lurched violently as though it had hit a pothole.

An ear-splitting shriek broke out, ringing through the cabin.

Like clockwork there was a comforting voice through the speaker above my head.

''Don't worry,'' it told us.

''It's only a wee bump.''

A bright blue flash filled the cabin, blinding my eyes; the rumbling was deafening; it stung my ears like angry bees.

A huge boom erupted from outside. As my eyes focused I glanced out the window seeing horror itself!

Thick black smoke and bright yellow flames erupted from the mangled turbine; long cracks lined the plane's wing.

The end of the torn wing was flapping limply in the wind.

Terror struck the cabin like wildfire; bloodcurdling screams filled the air.

My stomach lurched as we began to spiral out of the air.

People were thrown around the cabin like rag dolls in a drier.

I was thrown forward violently, the belt digging into my torso, cutting my breathing.

The ball of fear inside me erupted, spreading through my body, the trickle of sweat turning into a steady river flowing down my face.

This is it, I told myself.

An enormous crash ripped through the cabin.

Everything went black.

 


 By Max Stewart, Year 11, St Kevin's College


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